The simbelmynë and I are kin,
Blossoming in this land of Men:
A western star the heavens wept
Upon the mounds where Dead are kept.
The daughter of all noble kings,
Within my soul, a war cry sings;
Within my veins, Death’s fire flows…
I hide it, silent as the snows.
A lone, white girl amid the grass,
I see both horse and rider pass.
But as a figure carved in stone,
I am condemned to wait alone.
Condemned to stay on faltering feet,
To guard my lord King’s empty seat:
Lured by the sirens of valiance,
Yet I cannot join the brave’s defense.
The hero of my heart departs;
I watch him from the cold ramparts.
He rides away to war—to doom—
A pale light set against the gloom.
His destiny beyond my own,
His heart caught up, mine left alone.
My fate is but a bitter thing
That chokes my heart—an iron ring.
And now the war-tide pulls too strong—
Rumbles with the Rohirrim’s song.
My snowy wings rupture this cage;
I swoop into the battle’s rage.
A pale light on the Pelennor,
A simbelmynë amid death’s gore,
Out of the dark, into day’s waking,
To hope’s end I ride, and to my heart’s breaking.
Soon comes upon me deathly chance:
The Witch-King’s bitter countenance.
Intent upon his prey, he stands,
Cold torture in his iron hands.
Beyond my utmost strength, this foe,
Crushing my shield with a careless blow.
I stagger backward, slight and small,
A flower before the doom of all.
I am no man, but heave one breath,
And, gazing in his mouth of death,
I drive my sword beneath his crown.
He shrivels like a blackened thorn.
I crumple to the battle floor,
A pale light on the Pelennor:
Small sliver of the morning sun,
My golden head lies bowed, alone.
A simbelmynë amid death’s gore,
I mark the dead of Pelennor:
A western star the heavens wept
Upon the field where Dead are kept.
Within, my fire grows ever faint,
Leaves in my heart a cold complaint.
Dark voices shroud me in a dream.
My life is but the palest gleam.
I wake to health, but not to hope,
Through veils of shadows forced to grope,
In silent halls of healing lie,
While outside, others wane and die.
Silent, I stand upon the wall,
My body freed, my soul a thrall…
Until a gentle lord espies
My brokenness and agonies.
He, too, sees darkness in his dreams
Engulfing all the brightest gleams,
Yet speaks to me of hope and life:
The consummation of our strife.
He turns my heart within his hand
And casts aside fate’s iron band.
His unveiled hope ignites my soul,
And Simbelmynë now blossoms, whole.
I will flourish in this land of Men,
Destined to see hope thrive again:
A fair, bright flower amid the grass,
I will see the days of sorrow pass.
This is lovely! Eowyn is one of my favorite LotR characters, and this poem does her justice like little else I’ve seen.
I can’t tell you how much I enjoy your LotR poetry, Mary-Faustina! This one is good enough to rival your last gem, “O For a Star”, on my list of favorites! You know how I like Eowyn, and you really gave her an epic memorial in verse! Terrific rhyme, rhythm, and word choice! I particular love the glaring contrasts: “A flower before the doom of all”; and “Sweet simbelmyne amid the gore”. Two thumbs up!
Aw, thank you so much! Your approval means a lot to me, coming from such a talented poet as yourself.